Learning response: Ensure that you include references/ quotes for all theorists mentioned (Fanon,Gerbner etc). Include more book quotes .Provide specific examples of tabloid media sterotyping. Cover moral panic more and explain the theory.
Self assess your grade: D/E
2) use more specialist vocabulary and theories. Improve grammar as some sentences do not make sense. mention theorists names- not in brackets. (level 2)
3) Use other media concepts like genre link representation knowledge into what type of genre it is another is insitution link to the preffered and oppositional view (Level 2)
4) reference more to economic and political as why young people commit crime? and talk about the recession and because of this it has been cut down.
5) Include more moral panics and rhe effect on globalisation on the media, add more points about the critical debates.
6) Include postmodernist theories and how does this link with the gender and ethnicity? Look into steven neale and rick nitman. Discuss mopre on the theories in debt.(Level 2/3)
7) Bibliography - only used 3 books so add more into the coursework itself.
8) Footnotes - add more books, ownership and control - link to hegemony (who produces the media of negative reps) - Level 2
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